a second mix ITB ...better?

[luggnut]

i did this song earlier and had problems with the hi hat in the snare mic. i think i've gotten it fixed better any suggestions or critiques would be appreciated.

[archtop]

you really really don't like low mid, do you? ?.
It feels like everything has had it's low mid scooped out of it.

If the mix were a graphic eq. it would look like " V "
or "U"

I think you see where I'm going with this.
piezo direct acoustic does not help,
but I'm a crabby old piezo acoustic curmudgeon.
I smelled some line6, but that coulda been the french dip with dinner.

I imagine the snare drum sitting in the back of the room
during mix time sayin' : yeah! that level sounds 'bout right "

[Dubnick]

This is less about the mix, but you could clean up a couple timing issues that are distracting - like the guitar lick at about 2:15.