I was born without my brain

[dim light]

Some fun in the home studio... Don't know how to finish it though.

Anyone with a great rap voice that wants to add words...

Feedback would be awesome - you can tell me it sucks! I'm cool.

Thanks.

[dim light]

Gearslutz version -

[Carlo]

Lose the first 30 seconds...when the vocs come in, it works, but without 'em...it's not happenin'...hold on, the break is happenin'....oh, that's the end...oh well, bring back the vocs...

Rap, are ya fuckin' kiddin' me?

[mousdrvr]

OK OK OK OK!

Take this with a grain bro, but what I'd like to hear is the hook vox from V1 brough up at least 3db and mixed with GS Rant/Rap from V2

I thought this was cool!


-mous

[dim light]

Lose the first 30 seconds...when the vocs come in, it works, but without 'em...it's not happenin'...hold on, the break is happenin'....oh, that's the end...oh well, bring back the vocs...

Rap, are ya fuckin' kiddin' me?

Of course it's rap! His talking into a mic = rap! Thanks Carlo bro!

Maybe I'll do a intro and outro :icon_eek:

[dim light]

OK OK OK OK!

Take this with a grain bro, but what I'd like to hear is the hook vox from V1 brough up at least 3db and mixed with GS Rant/Rap from V2

I thought this was cool!


-mous

ThANKs bro!

You want me to add the "I was born without a brain chorus" to the version 2? That's a cool idea.

[mousdrvr]

ThANKs bro!

You want me to add the "I was born without a brain chorus" to the version 2? That's a cool idea.

Yep!

:Thumbsup:

[dim light]

I'll give it a try! - thanks! I'll upload a new version a lill later today.

[dim light]

Ok - I made some new stuff -

[dim light]

Man I'm finished...

This is the final version - the one they will play on radio! I will send it to Magic Mastering.

Tank you!

[mmf1978]

This song is fucking hilarious.

[crunch]

:lol:

Fucking love it.

:Thumbsup:

[mousdrvr]

:lol:

Fucking love it.

:Thumbsup:


Dim, Bro,

Great Job. I'm with my man Crunch here. But Dude! What's with the Tipper Gore version?

-mous

[lebouche]

I was born without my brain
How do you know that?

[emtou2u]

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

:Thumbsup:


:Twisted: :Twisted: :Twisted: :Twisted: :Twisted:

[mousdrvr]

Man I'm finished...

This is the final version - the one they will play on radio! I will send it to Magic Mastering.

Tank you!

Dim Hold the Phone Bro!

This is seriously working. I don't usually throw in my $.02 about stuff like this but I think this is classic. What I was suggesting is to break the rap up into something like verses and use the vocal hook for a chorus. Maybe even start with vocal hook. There's a natural division in the rap and I don't think it would be hard to do. The whole thing would clock in at about 3:00 that way. I think that whole "once more inside my brain" bit is fuck off hooky and you need people to hear that 8 or so times before you're out.

But dude if you do nothing to it at all :Thumbsup: :Thumbsup: :Thumbsup:


Respect!


-mous

[Carlo]

Dim Hold the Phone Bro!

Maybe even start with vocal hook.

But dude if you do nothing to it at all :Thumbsup: :Thumbsup: :Thumbsup:


Respect!


-mous


Agreed...start wit the backs...intro the vocalist...set him up, present him.

[dim light]

Dim Hold the Phone Bro!

This is seriously working. I don't usually throw in my $.02 about stuff like this but I think this is classic. What I was suggesting is to break the rap up into something like verses and use the vocal hook for a chorus. Maybe even start with vocal hook. There's a natural division in the rap and I don't think it would be hard to do. The whole thing would clock in at about 3:00 that way. I think that whole "once more inside my brain" bit is fuck off hooky and you need people to hear that 8 or so times before you're out.

But dude if you do nothing to it at all :Thumbsup: :Thumbsup: :Thumbsup:


Respect!


-mous

First off:

Thanks guys glad you like it!


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Mous!

I think it's cool that you have ideas how to improve the song and I like to try it... I'm not good with song arrangement but I think I understand what you mean. Opening up with the hook is just brilliant - I have a hard time with the chorus thing - cos I like the rap on the distorted (I was born without my brain) part... And I'm not sure how I can get away with both parts without making the song too long etc. Hey! I give it a try. - I'll upload a new version later without the Tipper Gore...

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Ok thanks guys! - Thanks Carlo -

Back to the drawing table. :Thumbsup:

[dim light]

Thanks for all feedback - please comment on my last mix.

I couldn't get the chorus thing to work - with the intro but I made the song longer and I now have the brain vocals - I added some fun stuff at the end... THANKS!