final tweaks...

[st robert]

i recorded and produced (or overproduced) this track for a local guy and would like some opinions before i hand him the final. as always i crave and appreciate the input...

http://solitaryconfinement.us/viscious_cycle.mp3

rob

[Aardvark]

...as always i crave and appreciate the input...



Er...pm Kenny...that's his specialty!:icon_eek: :lol:



Alright.

The production tricks are a touch prominent for my liking and the acoustic guitars too mid boomy.

I generally quite like the track and its arrangement but it is rather low-fi...perhaps that is your intent. Nothing wrong with that.

It is nice to hear songs that are not cookie cut and I applaud you the artist for the effort.

Best of luck with this.






Cheers,
Aardvark
:Thumbsup:

[Carlo]

I'm still feelin' a tad bit dizzy...I want the song to root someplace. It could use some resolvement somewhere, tho' maybe that is the cool thing about it.:Confused:

[st robert]

it's got a bit of a short-attention-span-theater sensibility to it and i still don't know if all the trickery is just a bit over the top, but the low mids on the guitars will get looked at, i promise.

thanks, gents.

rob