Do these guitar parts fit? (Fast paced rock)

[Brendo]

http://68.146.204.100/brendo/fightroughguits.mp3

And a short clip with the vocal melody added:
http://68.146.204.100/brendo/fightclip.mp3

This is a song that I'll be recording "real" guitars for tomorrow. The bass and keys will be rerecorded at a later date. These are "SKETCHPAD" recordings ONLY.

The guitar parts, in order of appearance:

INTRO
Rhythm L & R (Whole song)

CHORUS
Chorus chord chugs

VERSE
Verse "Ding" delayed clean guitar
Verse Octaves (start halfway thru verse 1, all the way thru verse 2)

CHORUS

VERSE 2
Chorus Riff Variation over 2nd half of Verse 2

CHORUS

BUILDUP

FLAMENCO - 4x
Clean power chords
Clean triads
Clean Tremolo guitar
(all three will eventually be replaced with a mix of acoustic and electric guitars - suggestions welcome. I was thinking of doing some open tuned stuff here as well, some nashville tuned, some regular acoustic, some nylon string... but no idea what part where. I'm not recording this bit tomorrow, and will likely use these tracks as placeholders tomorrow. also, on the "hits", i was thinking of adding extra percussion/stomps/handclaps - suggestions?).

FLAMENCO HEAVY - 6x
Rhythm Guitars
Arpeggios come in for the last 2x

SLOW CHORUS/END

Also, if you have any ideas on a keyboard sound that would work and not sound so lame, suggestions would be most welcome.

[dikledoux]

Yes, they fit together. But when you get further down the road you'll want to treat the parts differently to uh... differentiate them, cuz right now it doesn't sound like you've got all the layers you listed in your notes.

dik