Wow guys thanks for the replies! I haven't checked for about a week because for a while I wasn't getting replies.
I actually re mixed the song again since I posted this, I thought there were some pretty bad aspects of this one I posted.
Btw I'm glad you noticed the background vocals I thought they sounded pretty nice. Anyways I think your tweaked track sounds cool. I'm gonna actually post a new mix of a different song right now. Feel free to critique that one too, any input is always helpful!